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Flowers On the Hill
Contributed by
ever1der
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Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 02:28:15 AM in AEST
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Lavender, blue and yellow
wildflowers dot the hill.
Her gaze dreamy and distant,
her elbows on the sill.
She thinks of someone far away
inquiring is her gaze.
inaudible and deep her sighs
she thinks of other days.
A dust cloth lays there watching
by elbows where they rest.
Mundane chores are waiting
for the moment she's digressed.
Dreams have taken over
she's unmindful of the time.
Until her reverie is broken
by the old clocks chime.
At last her deep sigh can be heard
as she pulls herself away.
Mundane chores have tired
they must be done this day.
Soft hands grasp the dust cloth
elbows leave the sill.
In her heart she carries thoughts
of flowers on the hill.
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Re: Flowers On the Hill
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 04:38:55 AM AEST
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A melodious, thought proving write,
full of what might have been!
Very touching poem.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: Flowers On the Hill
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by richard2 on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 06:35:30 AM AEST
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| Very good - Very Very Good, the last two lines are memorable. Keep on with the fine writing. |
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Re: Flowers On the Hill
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by NightOwl61 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2011 @ 11:09:15 AM AEST
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| a gentle penning, with depth and shades of sorrow and apprehension, of want and what-if's. I'm sure there will always be someone peering up at that hill covered in flowers. Quite an effecting write. tfs |
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Re: Flowers On the Hill
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by elle on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 06:50:40 PM AEST
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Your words are very lovely & dreamy in a wistful, forlorn way. . . transcending syllables,
your poem moves one on to experiencing the feelings of a pensive mind. . . thanks so
much for sharing. elle |
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