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Forest Miniature
Contributed by
richard2
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Monday, 26th December 2011 @ 03:50:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Forest Miniature
Gray fox in river shallows
Quiet as eyes
Clusters of yellow oak
Turning into arms
I touched the warm bed
of a vanished doe
Copyright ©
richard2
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2011-12-26 03:50:03]
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Re: Forest Miniature
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by witaishere on
Monday, 26th December 2011 @ 04:35:53 AM AEST
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| Nature poems are cool. I like your unique approach. Awesome stuff!! |
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Re: Forest Miniature
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 05:01:58 AM AEST
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Doe's simply do not vanish! They merely
sprout wings! Surely you've seen Santa's
Sleigh! You have a unique writing style
that provokes thought! Ouch! My brain hurts.
But I'm getting hooked.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: Forest Miniature
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 12:56:03 AM AEST
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Very nice. I'm loving the simple elegance of your writing.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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