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My girl's poem

Contributed by darkwolf223 on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 08:52:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Well I don’t think I can write you a symphony
But, I can easily go off about how much you mean to me
Now, I know that all poems aren’t supposed to rhyme
But I think I got plenty of time…
So I think I’ll start this one off slow
Then come back with a killer blow!

Now I know how to do the whole “roses are red, violets are blue”
But girl I’m trying to make this rhyme just about you<3
Only problem is I don’t know where to start about you
Really I have no clue!
I could start with your amazing eyes
Or something about how your fun sized!

Or maybe I could go Edward Cullen on you….
And say a line or two?
Something about how you’re my own personal brand of heroin
And I just think about shooting you in

Now, I don’t want to be scared
But you just make me feel so impaired!

Ok, back to talking about you
Let me explain why I’m stuck like glue
I remember how I couldn’t take my eyes of you
When I first caught a glimpse of you

You where sitting there on the floor
Asking me if I won the race just a few days before

Now you take my breath away
When you are just a couple feet way
I tell you that you are beautiful
Because really you have no equal
You love to laugh and have fun
And I think I’m becoming close to done

Now I hope you like what I’m writing
Cause my fingers are close to dying
Also, all of this is coming from the heart
So, if you don’t like it please just shoot me with a dart

Now I think you’re an amazing girl
As beautiful as an ocean pearl
But, this poem should come to an end
And I just need to say
You’re much more than a friend<333

Copyright Â© darkwolf223 ... [ 2011-12-25 20:52:15]
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Re: My girl's poem (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 09:07:28 PM AEST
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Very beautiful writing.
Blessings,
emy

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