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Tyrannosaurus Rex
Contributed by
richard2
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Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 03:31:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Tyrannosaurus Rex
Tyrannosaurus was an enormous feast
That roved about,
Eating the smaller beasts
He was the ruler of all he heard,
All he saw, all he ate among
The ferns and stones
Yet along the bank he slipped
And learned
The fossil school of bones
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2011-12-25 15:31:13]
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Re: Tyrannosaurus Rex
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th December 2011 @ 02:34:24 PM AEST
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I like the simplicity 'n' curiosities in yer piece. Piques an int'rest in learnin' more. Yer kid's lucky. A ten fer teachin'.
wabl
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Re: Tyrannosaurus Rex
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by Daniel_L_Bamberg on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 09:58:40 AM AEST
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Wonderful! When children's poetry done in the vein of Silverstein works it is just damn wonderful. I love this, it is a perfect introduction for a child into the world of creative language and all the while is actually informative. You should consider writing a series of these find a cartoonist and get a book published this could be an untapped gold mine for you and well considering what kids are reading these days, we need a comeback in true children's literature.
OUTSTANDING!
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Re: Tyrannosaurus Rex
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by ammar on
Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 10:45:03 AM AEST
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It's a striking poem, cleverly structured, and precise.
One of the best children poems around here.
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