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I Miss You All
Contributed by
aliopterix
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Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 02:49:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I Miss You All
Heart-ache - - I miss you - - so
In hospital you went - -
Time - - too short - -
No good-byes...
Do I have your acceptance - - father?
Do I have your praise - - mother?
Do you forgive me - - sister?
I’m afraid to know...
When you went - - it hurt me
Kept me at work too much
Did not let you go
I miss you all...
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aliopterix
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2011-12-25 02:49:57]
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Re: I Miss You All
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by richard2 on
Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 03:40:21 AM AEST
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A tip of the hat this Christmas morning, excellent -
more than excellent, actually fine and brilliant like wine glasses under the roses. |
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Re: I Miss You All
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by maverick47 on
Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 07:41:49 AM AEST
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| a sad reflexion...well written..merry chrisrmas nevertheless |
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Re: I Miss You All
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by angelus8663 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2011 @ 08:45:03 AM AEST
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| Your pain comes through clearly, a very good write my friend |
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