Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	21-November 21:39:34 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Never Show You

Contributed by berg on Saturday, 24th December 2011 @ 08:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Let the rain poor down another night of sorrow creeping on his heart.
As the meta-emotion begins to give him conflicting fights.
He concentrates and analyzes what brings him his light.
Knowing what he can't have is what seems to be the only thing he holds on to.
He tries to push it down hoping the feeling will not linger,
everything rushes up as soon as he sees her.
Having it so close to him and secretly it's not enough
being in love, this kind of love, it's something if he shares he's afraid it will all be lost.
Knowing that there is nothing here of lust,
it's the truest love he ever found but seems he's had enough.
Inevitable scars from dancing solo on that thin line
he can't believe he did this to himself but he thinks of it too much of the time.
The feeling should never of existed, because it will never be returned.
at least not as love he has for her.
He's just her best friend

Copyright © berg ... [ 2011-12-24 20:31:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Never Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Saturday, 24th December 2011 @ 10:55:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

your poem is filled with emotion
someone once commented on a poem i had written
they said it was not a textbook example
poetry is a written account of an emotion or thoought that one has
there is no incorrect way to write it
be proud of what you feel and let no one change what you write if you do it is no longer your feelings but theirs

Joe

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com