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~*~Misty~*~
Contributed by
Dace
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My name is Misty I am but three
My eyes are swolleen I cannot see
I must not be loved for I am punished by cigarette burns
I must do right I can't do wrong or else I'm locked up all day long
When I wake up I'm all alone the house is dark
my folks aren't home
Im really just an expensive joke no more no less then speed or coke
Be quiet now! I hear the car my dad is back from Charlie's Bar
I hear him curse my name he calls I squeeze myself against the wall
on my bed its too late his face is twisted into hate
I feel the pain again and again
Oh dear God please let it end
My name is Misty I am but three last night my father murdered me....
Copyright ©
Dace
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2003-05-03 20:25:00]
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 09:31:29 PM AEST
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| Yes it was sad.....so many today have to deal with such a life.....well written....take care |
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 11:08:17 PM AEST
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your write was strong,, the situation stinks,,but you called it to the attention of the world beautifully
Shari |
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 11:48:22 PM AEST
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Omg That was so touching & sad!
Makes me want to hug my kids more today!
Christina |
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by Lylah-Rose on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 09:48:52 PM AEST
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| the horrors of this world are sad . . . and no one cares to recognize them. good for you for bringing it to the light, sad situation though. i've been there before. |
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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| Misty wow that give me a cold shifffer. I love this but I hate the fact it's true. I am sorry. |
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:34:05 AM AEST
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| Misty wow that give me a cold shifffer. I love this but I hate the fact it's true. I am sorry. |
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by SpoiledBrat on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 03:42:29 AM AEST
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| this is a good poem and i submited a poem that my sister wrote like 3 months ago that i found in my dresser and the end sounds a little like urs........ well anywayZ its really good |
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Re: ~*~Misty~*~
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by Dusty on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:56:17 AM AEST
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Wow. Talk about chills. Jeeze.
~Dusty~ |
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