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There I Go
Contributed by
Jeriku
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Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 07:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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There i go thinking of you again
Mind twisting and bending
Reality from truth
Alone in this photo booth
There i go again
Thinking of a lost friend
What is lost cant be found
Even if i tried with every pound
For matter doesnt matter
ashes have been scattered
Scars have been made
To rest you were laid
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Jeriku
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2011-12-23 19:55:36]
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Re: There I Go
(User Rating: 1 )
by Anara on
Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 08:54:01 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed how it seemed to flow while sharing emotions |
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Re: There I Go
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by Archie on
Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 10:19:33 PM AEST
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| Seemed like rap to me. This is acceptable and shows marked improvement from some of your other writes. So far I like your recession poem the best. |
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