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Rebuild
Contributed by
Anara
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Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 10:41:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tossed away like a broken toy
Left to fill this empty void
I fell for you
My love was true
You threw it back
Claiming I lacked
You took my innocence
You took my pride
You left me down
I wish I died
It took forever but I finally found it
My temper
My hate
My pride
Even if it was too late
Thank you for breaking me
Giving me a chance to rebuild
I am whole
Regained what you stole
And I'll never break again
Copyright ©
Anara
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2011-12-22 22:41:37]
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Re: Rebuild
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 11:39:30 PM AEST
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everybody breaks...
just saying... ^_^
keep writing. |
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Re: Rebuild
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by aliopterix on
Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 05:17:08 PM AEST
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| Thank you for sharing in your words. It must be cathartic for you. I hope you are in a good place now - - a touching poem. All the best - - Aliopterix |
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Re: Rebuild
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by spencer1607 on
Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 10:05:14 AM AEST
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| I can definitely sympathize with this one |
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