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Mister nice guy
Contributed by
Jeriku
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Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 07:25:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Hey mister nice guy
Phony tie telling white lies
Look me in the eye
Copyright ©
Jeriku
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2011-12-22 07:25:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mister nice guy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 08:55:20 AM AEST (User
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Howdy, Jer,
First time to read ya, I think. First time done proud the 5-7-5 of haiku. Somethin' I learnt recently 'bout the rules of haiku - subject nature. Senryu is of human nature. I wrote a bunch of senryu thinkin' I wrote haiku. Lived with that mistake fer 'bout fifteen years or so. Ya did good, though, first time out.
wabl
KenMoore
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