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From Dusk Till Dawn
Contributed by
aliopterix
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Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 03:38:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From Dusk Till Dawn
She turned and laid a hand upon my cheek
The touch was light but carried with it heat
So intense it made me feel almost weak
From my head to the souls of my feet
My whole body quivered with anticipation
Sweat appeared on my body not hot but cold
Like a refreshing shower of precipitation
That excited me to the point of being bold
Lying there beside her I traced her silhouette
With my fingertips causing her to groan softly
I increased the pressure and she moved closer
Ever more urgent my attentions became more
Focussed and as nature took its inevitable
Course - - we made love from dusk till dawn
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2011-12-22 03:38:12]
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Re: From Dusk Till Dawn
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 04:02:37 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: From Dusk Till Dawn
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by angelus8663 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 06:11:57 AM AEST
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| Great write al, the structure is good and the reader can feel the passion and anticipation building. Nice one |
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