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she had grey eyes
Contributed by
likeonaplane
on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 08:48:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the day is cold even after the sun.
im *****y and dragging because Mondays begun.
i search the day finding all to be bare,
except the girl with the beautiful hair.
she walks in our store bundled in clothes
from her chin, to her shoulders, to her knees, to her toes.
her beautiful smile benieth grey eyes
had the power of the clearest Alaskan night sky's.
she had strait black hair like a Spanish queen
if shed stayed longer i know i could see
the start of my life, the end, and all in between.
but she walked out like a mistake had been made.
a horrible misfortune, a failed escapade.
that's just life, im sure ill move on.
lets see what Tuesday will plant and spawn.
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likeonaplane
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2011-12-21 08:48:26]
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Re: she had grey eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 09:37:17 AM AEST
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Oh, cool. Like goin' to bed each night recallin' the day then wakin' up to a new day maybe every day. What a refreshin' write! Nice job.
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Re: she had grey eyes
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by dannye103 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 10:12:42 AM AEST
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Witty whimsical and heart felt...I like it, a lot. Nice job!
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