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Alone With a Poem
Contributed by
2bpositive
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Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 08:38:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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My poem is a message, you may try to decipher it if you will
you may laugh at me, maybe cry, but I won't let you sit still
evoking emotions deep in your soul, and you need to know
feelings that define who you are, from your heart they flow
A message of truth and hope, to those feeling they live alone
as you read, you begin to think, you can no longer postpone
my words enter your heart, since that's from where they came
thoughts of truth meant to incite, because in them is no shame
Words from within, an absolute truth, is with what we do battle
trying to stir sleeping souls from their slumber, with a rattle
having considered the desired goals, they're as clear as is day
within reach to all, because acquiring the truth is not far away
The spiritual world can be seen, but not with the sight of your eyes
you must first find absolute truth, by submitting yourself to the wise
allowing yourself to perceive, truth resides above a human sphere
a plateau where holy letters and numbers, to Creation they adhere
The world was created for one purpose, to find completion via correction
where humanity will unite, exchanging hatred and jealously for affection
man was created in G-d's image, indifference to be replaced with concern
being able to honor men as we honor ourselves, humanity has yet to learn
Focused on our own needs, we've become cold to just what this life is about
it's not about what I can do for me and mine, or where to maximize my clout
life is about working on our ugly character traits, accepting a need to change
stop looking in that mirror, your vanity is what is truly the thing that is strange
The yesterdays in your life, gone forever and never to return, so try and accept
we down below were not created as angels, each of us with our distinct defect
yet hope exists while we are still alive, we must act now and examine our ways
choosing to follow that safe path of introspection, while we still have those days
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2bpositive
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2011-12-21 08:38:05]
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Re: Alone With a Poem
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 09:50:32 AM AEST
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To be positive I swear I woke up this mornin' thinkin' these same thoughts in diff'rent words 'n' phrases. Wrote a poem, saw I had only one opportunity to post 'n' posted another. But I plan on postin' a thing called The Worthy Way later today. I think ya might like it. I'll dedicate it to yer handle name. Wonderful write!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Alone With a Poem
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by dannye103 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 10:17:19 AM AEST
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| A lovely poem which captures the troubles of human kind in a few short verses. Well Done and Thank You! |
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