|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Off Key
Contributed by
richard2
on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 01:36:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
|
Off Key
The morning takes dark wing
Into the past
As I suffer silence
To write of the
Mysteries of time and memory
Often the sensitivity of poets
Is a curse, a solitary curse.
The curse that makes the tears
That no one else can see
A curse that makes one sing
With words of beauty and delight
But seemingly always
Off key, alone against the night.
Copyright ©
richard2
... [
2011-12-21 01:36:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Off Key
(User Rating: 1 )
by angelus8663 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 01:38:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| really loved this, it's the very definition of a poet. Excellent write |
|
|
Re: Off Key
(User Rating: 1 )
by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 04:48:30 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| My good friend David always says less is more and this is why. Poignant and beautifully crafted - - thank you for sharing - - Aliopterix |
|
|
Re: Off Key
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st December 2011 @ 11:47:54 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Let senryu live on! Betcha there's a bunch of poets sayin' "Right on!" to this piece of perfect "less".
wabl
KenMoore
cowboypoet |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
