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I'm Just Me
Contributed by
angelus8663
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Tuesday, 20th December 2011 @ 08:52:48 AM in AEST
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I am who I am, and I知 not going to change,
I知 laid back, thoughtful and a little bit strange.
I write poetry for fun, and to let my feelings out,
It痴 either that or scream and shout.
I smoke too much and really should quit,
I知 never very popular or a really big hit.
My relationships end badly, mostly my fault,
Because I don稚 let people, in to my inner vault.
I知 not a perfect person; there are many things I do wrong,
I should look after myself more, I would never look good in a thong.
I have to laugh at myself, otherwise I might cry,
But I am who I am, and will be till the day I die.
Maybe a good woman can change me, but I致e yet to find one,
Every time I thought I had, I just end up getting done.
I知 content to accept my faults, and for now to let them be,
I see no need to be someone I知 not, I知 just me.
Copyright ﾂｩ
angelus8663
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Re: I'm Just Me
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by aliopterix on
Tuesday, 20th December 2011 @ 09:58:44 AM AEST
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| You are too hard on yourself. From earlier writings you are a good friend and from your writing you are a great poet who is not afraid to experiment outside the comfort zone. The kind of guy I'd like to meet and proud to call my friend. Nice write Dave, - - Alistair |
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Re: I'm Just Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th December 2011 @ 10:34:17 AM AEST
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The last line of the second verse belies that poetry is "the window of one's soul." Though ya may deny it, we appreciate the peek. Nice write with a good capture of, "Hey, I'm just me."
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