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Missing You
Contributed by
stephyy87
on
Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 11:42:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I hope you didn't forget about me
With you is where I want to be
If I could wish upon a star,
I'd wish that, baby, you weren't so far
Being apart from you increases the pain
If I could, I'd be stuck like a stain
Thinking of you hurts the most
Everyday I go from pillar to post
My hurt keeps growing the more you're on my mind
All I'm really doing is falling behind
No matter how much I keep on trying
I'll always end up sitting here crying
But all I want you to know is that I'm missing you,
And I hope you're missing me too...
Stephanie ♥ Angel
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2011-12-19 23:42:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Missing You
(User Rating: 1 ) by angelus8663 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2011 @ 08:11:43 AM AEST (User
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very good work, well written and the rhyming scheme is first rate. Your emotions come through clearly and cause the reader to empathize. Well done |
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