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True Strength
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 04:29:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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I see you there... you lay so still
my eyes... they cannot leave...
and as i watch... life slip away...
i remind myself to breathe...
I take a breath... and then you turn...
and look into my eyes...
a smile breaks across your face...
pain hidden in disguise...
The strength within... that fragile smile...
can be felt across the world...
and I will never leave your side...
my beautiful... brave girl.
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deusdeira
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2011-12-19 16:29:02]
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Re: True Strength
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by angelus8663 on
Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 05:11:02 PM AEST
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| wow. really powerful and superbly written. my heart goes out to you |
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Re: True Strength
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by aliopterix on
Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 06:45:30 PM AEST
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| God bless...A beautiful piece - - thank you for sharing - - Aliopterix |
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Re: True Strength
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th December 2011 @ 11:16:12 AM AEST
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Gives a more powerful definition of strength to the magic of "goin' out with a smile." Poignant 'n' pure in presentation.
wabl
KenMoore
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