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You Walk Beside Me
Contributed by
angelus8663
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Sunday, 18th December 2011 @ 05:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Been a year since you passed, and I miss you more each day,
Everything reminds me of you, what people do and what they say.
You were taken from us, long before your time,
The victim of a pointless and horrible crime.
The man who decided to have just one more that night,
Is now behind bars, which is just and right.
It doesn’t fill the hole, that you left in our lives,
But your memory lasts, your spirit survives.
When the times are dark, and my feelings are low,
I can feel you with me, and you ease my woe.
I know you’re still around, that you watch over us all,
When we’re in pain, you answer the call.
You’re gone, but not forgotten; remembered in every way,
Loved more than you know, missed every single day.
You support our lives, guide us through what must be,
On life’s long journey, I feel you walk beside me
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2011-12-18 17:00:57]
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Re: You Walk Beside Me
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by richard2 on
Sunday, 18th December 2011 @ 06:18:49 PM AEST
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| Those of us who have also experienced loss feel your pain, Your poem is Excellent. The last line is truly memorable. |
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Re: You Walk Beside Me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th December 2011 @ 10:38:50 PM AEST
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Sad but very beautiful writing.
I can totally relate.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: You Walk Beside Me
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by aliopterix on
Sunday, 18th December 2011 @ 11:20:38 PM AEST
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| Another exquisite piece of work. I really enjoyed this poem which is written so eloquently and with such feeling -- Al |
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Re: You Walk Beside Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 08:00:50 AM AEST
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Beyond the beauty of the piece the underlying hurt of destruction wrought by the senselessness of "one too many" is emphasized by the loss of a cherished reason fer livin'. Number 10 here. Kudos'
wabl
KenMoore
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