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As She Sat Beneath The Leaves
Contributed by
richard2
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Saturday, 17th December 2011 @ 06:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As she sat beneath the leaves,
Reading my poems
In the warm autumn shade,
I heard her breath catch
And her soft voice
Whisper of the beauty in the words.
Softly, softly she went her way
And I began my ramble through
Words and wreck and war
But that moment, as the autumn sun
Drifted through the golden leaves,
Was when I found my words
Might gently touch the soul
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richard2
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2011-12-17 18:59:55]
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Re: As She Sat Beneath The Leaves
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by Homeslice on
Sunday, 18th December 2011 @ 02:46:41 PM AEST
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amazing. just. amazing.
plz read mine |
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Re: As She Sat Beneath The Leaves
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 09:44:10 AM AEST
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A period from 1965 to 1980 I lost all of my collected poetry to jealousies, anger 'n' revenge. Your piece written "50 years ago" made me reminisce the loss I experience of catchin' the moments of romance that now are just memories. Very nice capture.
wabl
KenMoore,
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Re: As She Sat Beneath The Leaves
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 10:41:53 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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