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I Would Talk With Thee
Contributed by
aliopterix
on
Saturday, 17th December 2011 @ 05:32:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I Would Talk With Thee
I would talk with thee - - for I am lost
See here before you kneels but a man - -
With confusion in his heart - - the cost
Of loving deeply of her - - woman
She came to me bereft of money...
And I - - took her in and kept her warm
‘Twas good for me - - Lord - - oh lonely me
But now within my stomach flies swarm
She has taken me - - yet spat me out
For what reason - - truly I know not
When asked of this she doth scream and shout
With fiery eyes - - oh - - and passion hot
Counsel me - - for I would have her so - -
Complete with temper and her madness
Tell me how - - my Lord - - for you must know
And I shall worship you with gladness
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Re: I Would Talk With Thee
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 17th December 2011 @ 11:13:52 AM AEST (User
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Seems to me you've entered a new realm... a good place methinks. It's a pleasure to read this poem. I look forward to your further explorations into our special universe. Great rhyme scheme. Not tooooooooooooooooo loooooooooooong. Gallant. --Flint Hunter (aka David) |
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