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In Chaos
Contributed by
aliopterix
on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 02:59:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In Chaos
My mind in truth is disparate,
Particles and pieces of memory
Strewn about in chaotic reverie
From the challenge of loving you.
Shivers, chills, heart exploding, pain
And joy from meeting you, tasting you,
Sanity partially restored again,
I entreat you, synthesise anew
My parts and let me think straight,
Equilibrium now and the sum of my parts
Enjoys the whole of you; my mind berates
Our language for there is in truth no way
To adequately express this momentous day;
Just how immense, this love, our memory
Of connection is. Now this chance, free
To express whilst around me life spins,
I am talked out, exhausted, who wins?
The two of us, both, my love, let it be.
Copyright ©
aliopterix
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2011-12-16 02:59:27]
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Re: In Chaos
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 03:05:16 AM AEST
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| heartfelt |
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Re: In Chaos
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by angelus8663 on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 09:07:16 AM AEST
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| Your emotions come across really well in this piece. Good job |
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Re: In Chaos
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 09:48:58 AM AEST
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| A very moving poem, full of beautiful words and exquisite language. I really like the way the lines weave into one another so seamlessly. Well-written. Fully said. A triumph. --David (aka FH) |
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