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lies
Contributed by
Silentfire1579
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Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 10:41:29 AM in AEST
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As I sit here and lie to myself, that he will always be mine.
As I watch him from a distance, He made it
Crystal clear that he will never be mine forever to have beside
My side, to protect me from the danger I go through
Everyday.
Why did you lie to me when you said you loved me?
Why did you lie to me about us being together forever?
I told you I love you, but all you seem to
Hear is blah blah blah, as if I was never there in the first place.
Quit lieing to me please I can't take it anymore....
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2011-12-15 10:41:29]
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Re: lies
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 11:01:15 AM AEST
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Welcome to unenlightened man thinkin'. Wonderful capture of yer frustration. Patience 'n' answer to yer question might reframe yer capture. Soon as ya discover he'd been in a goofball frame of mind. Good capture of thought.
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Re: lies
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by angelus8663 on
Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 11:04:43 AM AEST
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| Direct, emotional and a sad transcript of most relationships today. Good write |
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Re: lies
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by aliopterix on
Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 11:36:07 AM AEST
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| Sad indictment on many relationships - I talk and you don't listen - no communication. Beautifully succinct and emotive. Nice, Aliopterix |
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Re: lies
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 06:55:50 PM AEST
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Emotional torture
wears ones soul down.
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