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Maybe this is hell

Contributed by iris1579 on Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 09:20:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

For every time he lied to me, the more of me he stole.
Then all the blades cut deep, as his deceptoins took its toll.
Now you have come to save me, to stop my bleeding.
Yet, you fall for her, and did not here my screaming.
Then she tore you apart, left you bleeding as well.
Now you are hurt, and putting me through hell.
Your still in love with her, and I'm in love with you.
As A lay here to die, my only thought is that you are here, too.

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Re: Maybe this is hell (User Rating: 1 )
by angelus8663 on Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 10:03:13 AM AEST
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I really liked this, the pain you feel comes across clearly and having been in this situation more than once, i know what your talking about. great work

Re: Maybe this is hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Damian on Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 02:59:47 AM AEST
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Would it not be easier to tell him?
Life is too short to not say how you feel. You never know he might feel the same way.

Re: Maybe this is hell (User Rating: 1 )
by iris1579 on Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 08:57:39 AM AEST
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Not really he is still in love with one of my friends, even though she cheated on him.

Re: Maybe this is hell (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 12:23:15 PM AEST
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really good. Made me think of a guy i used to know. Hope everything works out.

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