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Inner Walls
Contributed by
angelus8663
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Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 02:46:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You tell me that it’s ok, That I can trust in you,
That you’d never hurt me, it’s not something you’d do.
That relationships from before, belong in the past,
You say we can build a love that’ll last.
The thing is, I have these walls, that protect my inner self,
My barriers for heartbreak and mental health.
They’re impenetrable, at least that’s what I thought,
My heart can’t be won, stolen or bought.
But you see through my mask, to the vulnerability inside,
Im fighting the urge to run, to escape, to hide.
If you rip down my walls and expose my soul,
You have to promise to love my everything, my whole.
So you’ve torn down my walls, I’m exposed and afraid,
Please be gentle, or my last hope you’ll have put paid.
My heart is yours now, to have and to hold,
My walls gone forever, my soul to behold.
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Re: Inner Walls
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 08:36:35 PM AEST
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Succumbin' to the treasure breaks all self-imposed barriers to discovery. Aha. It's call love. Good luck.
Enjoyed this really nice piece of writin'.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Inner Walls
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by aliopterix on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 08:38:08 PM AEST
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| The soul, that sweet inner prize we hold most dear...Bravery indeed. Beautiful write. Aliopterix |
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