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Rebirth
Contributed by
Anakin
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Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 07:51:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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My friend has long since been gone,
Every day I have remembered her song.
This joyful day wonderful tidings I have heard,
That my friend has long ago returned.
There are indeed absolutely no words I can say,
One thing I know; my friend is back to stay.
The remembrance of her is clear as the noonday sun,
Through meadows tall now with laughter I will run.
This sudden joy feels like rebirth,
Once more I will smile with mirth.
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Anakin
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2011-12-12 19:51:25]
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Re: Rebirth
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by aliopterix on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 10:20:15 PM AEST
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Nice when something like this happens. Lovely write,
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Re: Rebirth
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by b_lee on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 11:14:58 PM AEST
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Very good way of expressing this feeling of serendipity, as I am sure you felt after writing this. Excellent write!
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Re: Rebirth
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by maverick47 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 07:15:50 AM AEST
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| FRiendhsips lost can never be replaced. Happy for your find |
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Re: Rebirth
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by angelus8663 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 11:03:01 AM AEST
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| This is exactly how i would feel if my best friend moved back, hopefully one day she will and i can write something like this, great poem. |
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