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Its Only In Your Head
Contributed by
GREAT-WHITE
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Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 03:34:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im always worried about what I will be in the future.
Or how lifes not fair and if we even know whats up there.
Or down there truthfully I really dont care.
Because if he loved us why is he never there.
Never there when we need him so what is there to believe in.
I dont know im not using my rhymes to pursue you.
But the truth is there is no facts.
The truth is what we lack.
All the stories has its cracks.
If im wrong I will do what I can to take it back
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GREAT-WHITE
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Re: Its Only In Your Head
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 04:13:05 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking, strong write. I agree on truth being what we need.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Its Only In Your Head
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by b_lee on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 11:32:16 PM AEST
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The truth is what we make it, whether or not to have faith is a lot like the truth. I do not believe in having blind faith, but faith in others is a part of being human.
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Re: Its Only In Your Head
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by angelus8663 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 11:05:39 AM AEST
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| Strong writing, i respect your willingness to put yourself out there. Keep up the good work |
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Re: Its Only In Your Head
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by AndyRaw on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 04:42:10 PM AEST
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| Love this poem. I as a Christian, have come across so many people who think they know everything about God, which is impossible. I think that God is pleased with us when we ask these types of questions that you are asking. He likes it when we "wrestle" with him over things that we dont think are right. |
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