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Contributed by
silent-cry
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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die,can't beg you to live anymore
go, but not to this heaven you've been longing for
drown, damned soul, falling lower and closer to eternal flames
scream, but you'll be already gone,none will remember your name
die, disappear and leave not a single trace
let me forget your soft breath, the pallor of your face
bleed, suffocate, but none can hear you scream
you're dying now...wasn't it your sweetest dream?
you're affraid to be forgotten, and eternity you chase
there it is,take it, take your chance,burn forever...but i wouldn't want to be in your place...
once you'll be gone, you'll be left to rot alone
how can you be sure heaven exists?if it did, wouldn't it have changed your mind of stone?
wouldn't it have told you to stay alive, and spare me the pain
your loss would cause me?but it doesn't, and the idea in your head remains
so die, i'll manage to forget you
from my mind and heart you'll slowly fade away
it will be very hard, it will break my heart
but...
please,please don't go, please stay...
don't kill yourself,
please change your mind
just give yourself time
and what you wish for will be easy to find
i take back all of what i said above
i beg you, stay alive, and i'll watch over you with all of my love
i'll do whatever you want,i'll appreciate whatever you do
i wouldn't go anywhere if it wasn't with you
i'll carry you in my heart,etch your name upon my soul
don't you know about lost spirits, how they suffer and howl?
i am so sure you don't want to end up this way
so spare us both a pain so intense,say you will stay alive,make my day...
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2003-05-03 02:25:00]
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Re: No Title
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 05:06:53 AM AEST
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| ah, beautifully sad perception from the other side~ the victims left from a suicide... very good poem... blessings... |
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Re: No Title
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 08:50:49 PM AEST
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That's so sad... beautifully written though. "i wouldn't go anywhere if it wasn't with you" Great write. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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by cant-skate on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:36:41 PM AEST
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I want to leave u cant stop me
if in god i c my life
i want to leave u cant stop me
by tears by words or by guns
Life ur livin is a lie
death is the only truth i have
so when u know ur time is near
maybe then u ll begin to understand
life down there is a strange illusion
U cant keep my from my faith i just wanna
die today
u may live to die another day
but for me its all the same
i prefer to die now
everyday i spend on this earth
is one day for me to blame !
go home get ur things runin coz u
one day u wont be able to wake ... |
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