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the feeling
Contributed by
munchkin3067
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Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 11:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like my whole life is caving in on me. Afraid to move, afraid to breathe fearing it may be my last breathe taken. Fearing to fall in love with someone and knowing they don't love you back. afraid to blink when im with him feeling he might vanish like he was never there. Frightened of feeling so close to him yet so far away and then it happens. My heart breaks. Everything goes cold and all turns dark and black. I know this feeling very well i'll try to get over it once more even though no one can mend my broken heart, it is in pieces never to be whole again without him.
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Re: the feeling
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by dvtpdw on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST
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| The pain and hurt in your words tug the heart. Very emotional write. Good job. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: the feeling
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by angelus8663 on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 03:20:34 PM AEST
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| I love the emotion in this, its all stuff i feel all the time and reading your work helps coz i know im not the only one, thank you, great work |
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