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Giving Up
Contributed by
munchkin3067
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Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 11:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Feeling terrified and alone. I am nothing but an empty waste walking without emotion, like a bottomless pit i just keep falling deeper and deeper. I try to get up, but no ones there help so i fall again, giving up i let go of the edge. Who's there to catch me? No one at the moment. I slowly wake up, lonely as ever, trying to stop my tears with no success. Wanting to hide from everything and push everyone out. Maybe it would be better to cut people out just like he did to me..
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Re: Giving Up
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by applehead on
Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 11:11:19 PM AEST
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| Its a shame that people like us should have to feel this way our entire lives, i know I have. Anyway, depression makes the art in the world. Comforting from time to time. |
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Re: Giving Up
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by aliopterix on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 12:59:28 AM AEST
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| I love the inexorable pace of this piece and the sudden crunch at the end...great write and read. Thanks for sharing, Aliopterix |
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Re: Giving Up
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by Ellewood on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 06:48:27 AM AEST
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| Keep using your poetry as an outlet. I know when I am down,it helps . I know it isn't the answer to it all,but remember that old saying-what doesn't kill us makes us stronger! |
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