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Father? Where'd you go?

Contributed by AdamZupancic on Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 10:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Don't hurt me.
don't put me what Ive already been through.
Don't push me.
to levels of insanity..
A child's dream of maturity.
but only found impurity.
so young so insecure.
a fatherless kid.
He walked out the door.
Search for the voice
he's been looking for
Does he give up?
Or keep pushing forward.

Tell me father..
do i cross your mind?
Do you feel bad
for leaving me behind?
I'm so sad.
but it's hard to cry.
A fatherless kid.
takes his.. time..

Mother.
I love you.
You stuck with me
and you pulled through.
He left us behind.
but you didn't change.
the energy... it was contained.
Never talks listened or heard his name.
Time healed all the pain.
I can never repay you for my domain.
but this will tell you it's the same.
Now...

Tell me father..
do i cross your mind?
Do you feel bad
for leaving me behind?
I'm so sad.
but it's hard to cry.
A fatherless kid.
takes his.. time..

Copyright © AdamZupancic ... [ 2011-12-10 22:06:36]
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Re: Father? Where'd you go? (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 09:46:46 AM AEST
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The words and pain in your poem touched me in my heart. I am raising my grandson and both his parents walked away. I know the wounds it can create. Your poem gave me hope. Great write, thank you for sharing.

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