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Sleep live
Contributed by
WillJackson
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Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 06:53:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Empty
The room is a mess but still empty.
My mind is working overtime but still empty.
I roll and turn in my bed wishing that a part of me was still here.
I listen.
Empty.
Where, what, when?
Questions as the image of her appears from the darkness.
It follows me, consuming me.
When will this beast stop following me.
I plan. I read. I adjust. I try to breath but still I have this mark on my hand.
Love.
Copyright ©
WillJackson
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2011-12-10 18:53:12]
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Re: Sleep live
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 07:24:57 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC,
This is some heavy duty writing.
Well done.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Sleep live
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by maverick47 on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 09:06:04 PM AEST
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| Something about repeating empty really strenthens this poem especially since it was impromptu |
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