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Wind through the trees
Contributed by
Ellewood
on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 12:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I look out my window
and what do I see
branches being blown by the wind
beckoning to me
Come out
come see
the wind wants you to be free
The wind will fly you up high
high enough to reach the sky
to a place high above
where there is only pure love
right to heavens door
where at last
you will feel pain no more
Come on
the branches call out
why must there be any doubt
dont you want to leave
be free of this place
for what you give here
only goes to waste
Okay I said at last
the time has come
to flee my sad past
I will go will go with the wind
and fly right along
for finally I know
where I truly belong
Copyright ©
Ellewood
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2011-12-10 12:45:33]
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Re: Wind through the trees
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 12:54:36 PM AEST
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| I often write about the wind and the sea and this is truly beautiful. |
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Re: Wind through the trees
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 02:39:13 PM AEST
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Very beautiful, magic words.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Wind through the trees
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by aliopterix on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 07:04:54 PM AEST
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| Such beautiful imagery. I am transported aloft, my mind, in truth a vessel dancing along on your words of wonder. Thank you for sharing - Aliopterix |
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Re: Wind through the trees
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 07:56:39 PM AEST
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Paint the picture beautiful and everyone will wanna go there. Includin' you. Another script yer own life message. Lovely one. Kudos
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Wind through the trees
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by Tracy on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 10:34:09 AM AEST
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"I look out my window
and what do I see
branches being blown by the wind
beckoning to me
Come out
come see
the wind wants you to be free"
I really like how you have made the trees come alive. I can feel the wind and see the branches gesturing for me to come out and fly. :)
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