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Realising Rejection
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Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
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The poets were:
sleepless_siren
tease_whizz
kangarose
kibbles
The_Phanton
Lovewriter
I opened up my heart and soul to you,
I was desperate for you to see.
I felt our love was strong and true
How wrong can a person be?
They always said that love is blind
and now I know it's true
this pain I feel was not foreseen
my curse for loving you.
You tossed me aside
You left my heart broken in two,
Confusion reigns my heart and soul
Will I ever get over you?
If love is so joyous
why does it end?
leaving a whole in my heart
slow to mend.
The pain of the past, hidden by a mask
Tears fall like rain, my heart succombs to pain,
A look into your eyes, has me thinking back in time,
Will love come my way again, or should I just pack it in?
For all the times
love twinkled in my eyes
but from yours
I saw only goodbyes.
Now from the heart
bleeding crimson red
Deep within I knew
No more could be said.
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Re: Realising Rejection
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:40:20 AM AEST
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This is beautiful you guys!!
YS |
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Re: Realising Rejection
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:46:41 AM AEST
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super write! you've covered all the emotions:P hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Realising Rejection
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 02:31:23 AM AEST
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very good write
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Re: Realising Rejection
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by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 04:26:32 PM AEST
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impressive well done.
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 06:14:00 PM AEST
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| first grup write i have read... it was great... im surprised it wasnt too ... shifty... anyways great write... |
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Re: Realising Rejection
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 04:58:07 PM AEST
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| this poem touches me on a personal level. I just realized my final rejection last night after loving someone for the last 7 years. |
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