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Walls do enclose me heart. When with you they fall apart.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 03:20:56 PM in AEST
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Sarcastic cover ups
Smiles for everyone
A laugh, indestructible
Forever full of fun.
Cheek and innocence
Messed in with attitude
Slightly kind, almost caring
Taking it too far, but not quite rude.
Acting the clown
With barriers over my heart
A minute in your presence
It's all falling apart.
You're the only person I feel safe around
The person I can tell everything too
Someone who's seen my inside out
Been there through every single mood.
I love you till death do us part
An enemy and a friend
You break my heart to pieces
But for you it will always- ALWAYS mend.
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CommasCanSeperate
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2011-12-09 15:20:56]
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Re: Walls do enclose me heart. When with you they fall apart.
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 05:25:11 PM AEST
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Great write..
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emy |
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Re: Walls do enclose me heart. When with you they fall apart.
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 08:16:18 PM AEST
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This is a sweet verse.
Michelle |
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Re: Walls do enclose me heart. When with you they fall apart.
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by Ellewood on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 08:08:23 AM AEST
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| I could feel your emotions in this writing piece. It is hard to find that one person who you could trust with all your emotions isn't it? Nicely stated. |
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Re: Walls do enclose me heart. When with you they fall apart.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 09:51:48 PM AEST
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| Good write. Sincerity in marriage. An absolute must |
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