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Death is a Nightmare
Contributed by
Lide
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Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 07:47:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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His eyes have not seen his future,
Neither his tongue knows such words.
In the dark lies and wait,
At the Conner of his Nightmares,
Death waits for him
Solitudes of his past drive him by fear.
In hope he awaits for his fate,
In disparity of a dream of beauty.
In the eyes of the one who holds him in the Pam of His hands
He sees liberty.
But his sorrow is thy comfort,
Enough to try him asleep.
Alas! Nightmare is, but a dream
Yet, he lives in the reality of the living nightmare.
Even the mighty and the brave fears in their hearts,
Cause Death watches them like ravens, waiting to feast,
Shall dead of a man justify the burden of Death?
But Death comes when one is unaware of his mortality.
Death cannot conquer what lies in eternity,
Why then fear death? For fear cannot exist without death.
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Lide
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2011-12-08 19:47:19]
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Re: Death is a Nightmare
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 12:01:58 PM AEST
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| Your words ponder that age old question on death. Very well done. |
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Re: Death is a Nightmare
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by AndyRaw on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 04:26:40 PM AEST
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| This poem seems to lack flow. There doesn't seem to be any unity in what you have written; some things seem out of place. But this is just my opinion so take it for what is worth |
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