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My Lovely Riley
Contributed by
argenismichael
on
Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 02:11:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My lovely Riley,
How I think of you so highly
I miss your touch
I miss your kiss
I love you so much
My lovely Riley
I know we are not on good terms
Its more sickening that hands full of germs
Your brighter than a ruby gem,
Like the rising sun in the a.m.
Your eyes remind me of a beautiful island
But nothing more beautiful than you my precious diamond
Your value so great to me
You makes gold seem like dirty old mold
You greater than a crystal, how I wish we weren't single
My lovely riley, how I love you so much
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argenismichael
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2011-12-08 02:11:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Lovely Riley
(User Rating: 1 ) by ever1der on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 09:03:18 PM AEST (User
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this has a happy feel to it even though there is an undercurrent of loss ( germs) I like the rhyme it has a happy sing-song feel to it. Makes it easy to read aloud. |
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