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We Orbit 2 Suns.
Contributed by
Cosby
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2011 @ 03:56:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I circle now a golden star,
The brightest ever seen,
upon the path that's set for me,
it's sunlight brightly beams.
This sun gives life, and light and love,
and hope but yet still fear,
a fear that all it's gifts to me,
Will all soon disappear.
Your Sun is golden too it seems,
and so your path is set,
around the light that gives us life,
your destiny preset.
You orbit 'round the star you love,
with naught but forward sight,
as those who seek to follow you,
forever fall, into the night.
I envy not your sun or path,
I only want your view,
Because my star is beautiful,
Because my star is you.
Copyright ©
Cosby
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2011-12-07 15:56:26]
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Re: We Orbit 2 Suns.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2011 @ 04:48:48 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Luved it all from start to finish.
It's mesmerizing.
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emy |
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Re: We Orbit 2 Suns.
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by Anakin on
Wednesday, 7th December 2011 @ 10:20:33 PM AEST
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That poem just blew me away. I read it all the way through and loved it. One of my greatest interests is the Sun and our Solar System, so the inclusion of suns and stars really caught my interest.
Congratulations, I will look out for more poems! |
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