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Hours of the Night
Contributed by
me
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
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so much clearer now
like glass
or the eyes of a child
all my questions
still unanswered
at least now are put into words
please bless me with some quiet
leave the lights off
forget the day
this is no time to be clear
it's time to fog my thoughts
with sleep
and yet the tongue runs
so the pen races
and my body hurts
shine the light
write the words
surrender
Copyright ©
me
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2003-05-02 22:05:00]
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Re: Hours of the Night
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by razorbladerose on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:43:44 PM AEST
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I really like this one. My fav. line is "leave the lights off
forget the day". I like your writing because it's real and you tell it!
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Re: Hours of the Night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 07:34:53 PM AEST
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| very real with heart and soul, simply beautiful! |
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