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Reflections on Power
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 01:12:33 AM in AEST
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I glide into submission... no force necessary other than relinquished power,
through sincerity I gain back my freedom... with just a touch of self preservation,
No boat comes to take me from this isle of remorse... though regretfully I do long for it,
Every bone and sinew in my body aches for past glory and yet I must submit,
for a boat steered without a rudder is no boat at all... but a shipwreck.
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Re: Reflections on Power
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by b_lee on
Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 11:20:27 PM AEST
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Very insightful. I enjoyed your view on what power is.
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Re: Reflections on Power
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by duff on
Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 09:23:05 AM AEST
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I enjoy the depth of this piece. There is a lot to latch onto here. The lines have a darkness about them that is gripping and mysterious. A stimulating piece of writing. Great job
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