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“Sinkin’ in”
Contributed by
oneir8dude
on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 09:01:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Clouded minds of darkened despair…
Mistaken words hang in the air…
Hurt and anger linger around…
My heart slammed to the ground…
Yet more word flung in spite…
No more can I stand and fight...
When my words are no longer heard…
Happiness and reality are quickly blurred…
Reaching out I cried for your aid…
Your concern would violently fade…
When I needed you the most…
Left is a Silhouette of your ghost…
Time I was on my way…
To the abyss I will stay…
All you had to do is listen…
Copyright ©
oneir8dude
... [
2011-12-05 21:01:31]
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Re: “Sinkin’ in”
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 09:09:52 PM AEST
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| Your anguish is palpable. Great write, Bill. |
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Re: “Sinkin’ in”
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 09:31:04 PM AEST
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Left is a Silhouette of your ghost…
Too cool. I really like this one, Sir William.
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Re: “Sinkin’ in”
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 07:19:45 AM AEST
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Deep InnerVision
I like it
good stuff.... |
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Re: “Sinkin’ in”
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 04:18:29 PM AEST
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Bout time for you to grace us with your word.
Great write, friend,
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: “Sinkin’ in”
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by AndyRaw on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 01:30:37 PM AEST
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| Your words create vivid images that have a strong emotional impact on the reader |
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