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And I was lost
Contributed by
Badboylilbituf
on
Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 09:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In a world so dark ,
Any light we hardly see
All alone I walk
So black,so cold
The vastness grips my heart
Pulling me into this forbidden place
I see not where I m goin
Nor where I from
I have no place , no ease of mind
I have dreams , but seem so far
I hope , I pray ,I need some light
For in my heart ,I am losing life
Walk so dark ,so long
Pure and bright, you lose all that
When I feel I have lost all faith
I stumble, I fall, I find myself
Caught so gentle , like a breeze
In your arms , I see your face
The beauty of it steals my gaze
The love in your eyes melts my heart
Like the wind , you flight my wings
Forever and always by my side
Sweet and true you are my life
Copyright ©
Badboylilbituf
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2011-12-04 21:36:54]
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Re: And I was lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 12:52:00 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Gret job.
I'm sure she'll like it.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: And I was lost
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 07:13:33 PM AEST
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| I think it's a beautiful poem. She should love it! |
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Re: And I was lost
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 06:05:22 AM AEST
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| Your poem conveys the love and hope you feel for your love. It's a very nice write, good job. |
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Re: And I was lost
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by funmi on
Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 06:46:38 AM AEST
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| Love It.... My Advice is give her when u know its definetly meant to be .... its best at that point |
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