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Voices in my Head
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm lying on the floor
Can't deal with this anymore
Tearing at my hair
It comes out in clumps
I don't even feel it
The emotional pain is just to intense
Trying to drink it all away
Chase away my tears and fears,
But it doesn't help
The world is so empty
And its sucked me dry
I'm sorry, I got nothing left
Giving in, to the voices in my head
Telling me to give up,
And how I'll never get out of here
Pulled under, waving goodbye
With my false smile
The spirits are winning, I give up!
The voices call me over
I'm not fully aware
Staggering, I crawl to them
Broken, in a drugged stupor
They whisper me things,
Things that make me cry
The emptiness breaks my will
I'm losing control, in free fall
The voices establish themselves
They know their victorious
I can't hold on anymore
The emotional pain is just to intense
Its ripping me apart
The voices in my head
I guess they won...
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Re: Voices in my Head
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:10:18 PM AEST
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| I like this, it reminds me of something i wrote just a few days ago, Don't Turn Out the Light, this is great, intense, and i know just how it is. Great write |
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Re: Voices in my Head
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by boobies on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:30:31 PM AEST
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| i am manic depressive. there's a lot of pain in this poem. i think it's very well spoken. good luck to you. |
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Re: Voices in my Head
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by Blue on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:31:02 PM AEST
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So many times you helped me just by leaving your comments on my depressed poetry...I struggle all the time with depression and I can relate...if you ever need anyone to talk to let me know.
and, also I loved this poem. |
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Re: Voices in my Head
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by AngryPrincess on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:01:48 PM AEST
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great poem Joel...you are having the same problems i am having and i dont know what i can say to you...you always say all the right things in my comments...all i know is i care for you and i hate that you feel this way...cheer up friend...
if you need to talk :O) im here
Lindsey |
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Re: Voices in my Head
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by bopeep on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:20:20 AM AEST
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| this is good as well... there is something about your poetry that just touches me. very beautiful. i'm sorry you go through the pain though. later |
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Re: Voices in my Head
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:37:39 AM AEST
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| oh hun this is so good, but so sad...i will e-mail you as soon as i can...please, don't ever give up...if you need to talk i am always here...i love you... |
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