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Sending Out An SOS
Contributed by
2bpositive
on
Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 10:57:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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A profound insight of truth have I acquired, but only by choosing to be isolated
accepting my suffering, because my quest for Truth is unwilling to be violated
where and when one finds the truth, the path of life will undoubtedly find light
but whenever falsehood is accepted, chaos will ensue and order will take flight
There is a high price to be paid, we no longer accept what others take for granted
only the real truth has meaning, what we read in newspapers is most often slanted
so where does one find the truth, this is something that mystifies the minds of most
but it can't be found in places of deceit, where beer and women cause men to boast
Lies and deceit are a true poison in life, a poison whose capacity for ruination takes root
by associating with those who perpetually lie, in time you too will also acquire their soot
attempting to remove yourself from this evil, having no choice, flee to a region unknown
more than sacrifice and self deprivation, you will need to commit yourself to being alone
Telling lies and utilizing deceit is a learned behavior, we know G-d didn't plant this in us when young
evil doesn't take hold of a person until they acquire understanding, children don't have a lying tongue
heavenly expectations are for us to seek this wisdom, thereby fortifying ourselves in order to believe
knowledge and understanding to perceive good and evil, choosing good that we will forever achieve
A way to truly liberate yourself from deceit, a disease so rampant in this world we live, affecting all but few
is by being cautious, and making sure to selectively choose those friends that seek this same wisdom as you
to find an eternal reminder for this truth I state, you need not go far, human history from Creation is this very proof
lies of the snake and the deceit he spread, causing death for us all, is the reason why a lie is the furthest from truth
Now could be your last chance to send out an S.O.S, you're in spiritual danger, your soul begs for an eternal existence
so keep yourself far from future suffering, by removing yourself from evil, and seeking after wisdom with a persistence
we live in a world with much good and many pleasures at hand, but don't fool yourself, the day of death slowly nears
prepare for this final journey, and choose your destiny, because your only saving grace might just be these very fears
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2011-12-04 10:57:48]
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Re: Sending Out An SOS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 07:50:54 AM AEST
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I was drawn to your name. All of us should be you more often. All of us should be sendin' SOSes such as yours 'n' gittin' involved in changin' direction of this whole dang world! Sounds like ya got a work list. Noble, frustrating 'n' melancholy at times. I'm disappointed, personally, in mankind. Or its current leadership. Lao Tzu would not be proud. More - humored. I loved yer write. Look forward to more.
KenMoore
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Re: Sending Out An SOS
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by AndyRaw on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 04:32:46 PM AEST
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| This poem is put together very well. I think you took the necessary time for these lines to make sense, and i applaud you for that. However, i would challenge your notion that children dont know how to lie because i know many children that have lied. But i understand the idea that you are trying to get across. Overall i really like this poem. |
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