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Wandering Thoughts
Contributed by
hansond83
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Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 06:42:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I lay in bed
I'm trying to sleep
But my mind slowly
Starts to creep
I don't know how
I don't know why
But suddenly
I start to cry
I'm all alone
There's no one there
I begin to wonder
Why I care
I've been alone
For what seems like years
I struggle now
To fight back the tears
It will get better
I don't know when
I'll be whole once more
I'll find you then
Copyright ©
hansond83
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2011-12-04 06:42:19]
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Re: Wandering Thoughts
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by Shanz33 on
Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 07:41:30 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful poem. I am so glad i read it. Well done. |
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Re: Wandering Thoughts
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 10:28:09 AM AEST
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Beautifully metered and great rhyming
pattern. You have "The gift!"
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns
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