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Troubled
Contributed by
theo
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Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 07:28:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My sorrow waivers like a stormy midnight sky.
Melancholy clouds deny the one unquestionable light.
Unjust droplets of rain pour down upon my peers.
The clouds pass and all my regrets become clear.
And convinced this circle will soon come again,
I savor this time of relief.
Leaving me to be forever-- troubled.
Copyright ©
theo
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2011-12-03 19:28:07]
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Re: Troubled
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by emystar on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 07:56:07 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Grab hold your pen and let it flow.
You're in for a great ride. sometimes shaky and other times sad.
You've got the natural touch for it.
Write, write, write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Troubled
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 11:24:08 AM AEST
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The Good Book tells us that in this life
we "Will" have troubles, so we should
not be surprised when they do come
our way. But it also yells us a day of
"Sonshine" is soon coming where all
our tears will be wiped away! Good job.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: Troubled
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 11:24:52 AM AEST
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The Good Book tells us that in this life
we "Will" have troubles, so we should
not be surprised when they do come
our way. But it also tells us a day of
"Sonshine" is soon coming where all
our tears will be wiped away! Good job.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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