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shes still gonna leave
Contributed by
kerryd
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Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 06:31:34 PM in AEST
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it dosnt matter how hard i try how much i hurt or how much i cry how much i want or how much i need no matter what i do shes still goona leave i could beg her to stay or hide her keys slash her tires or break her knees but when its allover shes still gonna leave you always said you would be mine for ever but you always lie so i should haave known better if i ever see you with another guy im not gonna walk up and punch him in the eye ill just say give her the keys cause no matter what you do shes still gonna leave thats who she is thats what she does shell say what she has to too make you fall in love so dont beg her to stay or say please cause no matter what you do shes still gonna leave
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Re: shes still gonna leave
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by emystar on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 06:41:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is an awesome write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: shes still gonna leave
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by doug on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 06:44:23 PM AEST
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| I like this. I'm a if you wanna go then go kinda person. Holding on to someone who does'nt want to be there or is'nt true is like trying to hold onto the tide as it goes back out. What's the point when you could instead use that time to look for someone better. Is good of you to warn the next guy... instead of punchin' him in the eye. lol. nice work , truly , Doug |
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