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Almost Safe
Contributed by
PaulaPuddephatt
on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 02:18:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Almost safe inside my sanctuary -
it's not that I'm afraid of solitude.
Yes, there is loneliness, but why delude
myself? In my heart, I must stay wary.
People will hurt you once your guard is down.
Hurt upon hurt - it gets hard to repair.
Still, I find that, in the end, I do care.
With no lifebelt, I fear that I might drown.
I just don't know the answers anymore -
as if I ever did. Does anyone?
Select a star to make a wish upon.
Remember not to double-lock the door.
I thought that I'd be safe here but I'm not.
I sense the final chapters in "their" plot.
Copyright ©
PaulaPuddephatt
... [
2011-12-03 02:18:50]
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Re: Almost Safe
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by Banjosandwitch on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 04:29:47 AM AEST
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| paranoya ha ha liked it |
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Re: Almost Safe
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by Blackheart on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 04:57:14 PM AEST
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| Despite the fact that it reminds of the time when I 13 years old and how I wanted to pass away, I really like this! Great poem |
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Re: Almost Safe
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by doug on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 06:03:28 PM AEST
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| Interesting structure. instead of abab or aabb you're rhyming with abba. Rhyming with Abba... ha! what a weird show that would be. Anyways a good interesting poem with a good lesson... don't run away and if you do don't lock the door to tight behind you.. at least that's what I got from it. Nice work , truly , Doug |
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Re: Almost Safe
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 12:11:05 AM AEST
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| for me, this poem was about the fear of letting someone close, and locking yourself inside. Nice poem. |
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