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Alone
Contributed by
hansond83
on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 03:51:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As I lay in bed alone
I wonder what went wrong
Everything I wanted in life
Suddenly is gone
I close my eyes and fold my hands
And say a lengthy prayer
I ask for just another chance
I cry "This isn't fair"
I ask for just a single sign
That my life will start anew
I pray for love and help for once
"Please tell me what to do"
I say amen and look around
I begin to have some doubt
I ask again for just one sign
My light flickers and goes out
I wake up to the morning sun
And stumble out of bed
I'm still broken and I'm still alone
I might as well be dead
My phone lights up and beeps just once
Did he really hear my prayer?
Did he send someone into my life
That for me, truly cares?
I open my phone and turn it on
I slowly start reading the text
It stirs my soul and opens my mind
But I don't know what to do next
Could it be? He heard my prayer?
Could any of this be true
I guess God works in his own strange ways
He lovingly sent me you
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Re: Alone
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 04:37:32 PM AEST
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An incredible write.
Welcome to YPDC.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Alone
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by rick2 on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 06:22:28 PM AEST
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| I loved it! Great writing. |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 12:31:07 PM AEST
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| We all feel like that some days. Your right but, he does work in many ways. Ways we won't understand. Good piece I liked it. It was well written. |
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