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Poetry Of A Landscape.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 03:26:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Come with me to the foothills of the Beacons
Where the wind howls the devil's lament
And the trees gather like gossiping fishwives,
Ancient fingers wagging at the mountain's
As they stumble through the clouds.
Hear the sound of water, pure unadulterated freedom,
As it tumbles down the hillside,
Rising and falling in a swirl of lathery white
Splitting the landscape with a force as natural
As the first cries of the newborn child.
Hear too the pulsing beat of the Kite's wings
As she sails unfettered across the vista of wild sky.
Now, come if you will, and sit with me on the porch
And watch the moon, unshackled at last, dance with the stars
Across the ballroom of the night.
Follow me to the fire's warm embrace and together
Let us recite the poetry of this landscape.
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cashfan1
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 09:44:26 AM AEST
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Beautifully painted picture. I can
almost feel the cooling breeze
and taste the cool water of the
slithering stream.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 10:33:23 AM AEST
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Tell you what, I'll let you recite the poetry of the landscape because I am no match for the way you do it. This is awesome. I love the way you tie everything together. We are all one with the earth and you have a true talent of stating that.
Excellent!
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 11:27:59 AM AEST
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| I really like this write! I see the land as you tell the story, and feel the surroundings as the poem flows along. Thank you. |
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by doug on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 06:28:53 PM AEST
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| Wow. I would like to see this place but somehow I fear I could not appreciate it or at least could not vocalize my appreciation in such a lovely way as you've been able to. Great work. You sir...are a wordsmith. Please keep writing... need more. truly , Doug |
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by spud on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 10:53:52 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
Magical, spiritual, and damn well the trip!
Tommy
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by spud on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 11:00:32 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
my last comment should read .................
''and damn well WORTH the trip''
T |
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by duff on
Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 09:27:08 AM AEST
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What an elegant piece of writing that has your transforming touch. You never fail to take us there my friend. It's an awesome talent you have. I'm sure there isnt a landscape you cant capture. Fantastic work.
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Re: Poetry Of A Landscape.
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by Tiny_Tina on
Wednesday, 1st August 2012 @ 02:50:35 AM AEST
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Timotheus is right! This is extraordinary!
Thx,
TT |
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