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happy poem
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i have this new feeling,
i've never felt before,
he told me he loved me,
said i was more then a whore.
this feelings so great,
it makes the depression leave,
and the longer we're together,
the more i believe.
maybe this is different,
then all the times prier,
with him i feel great,
he's all i desire.
but deep down i know,
this wont work out,
but why do i question?
why must i doubt?
i tell myself i dont deserve him,
that soon it will end,
no matter how much i try,
he will become just a friend.
we'll break up,
and we'll loose touch,
no matter what,
it'll be a disaster and such.
i guess i just have to live,
and love him today,
and to the future i shout,
come what may
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2003-05-02 15:05:00]
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Re: happy poem
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:13:23 PM AEST
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Re: happy poem
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by Cancer on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:40:30 PM AEST
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i'm not usually a fan of poetry about anything less than full-blown emotional disaster. but, this one had nice rythym, and the rhyme scheme was great. don't be so quick to dismiss what you have. you never know, he could be the one that lasts forever.
The Forked Tongue of Deceit
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